Monday, November 23, 2009

55 Fiction By Heavealie:Highway 45



I saw a vision last night.
In it I died in a car accident at highway45.
Before dying my wristwatch read 4:45 a.m.
Tuesday.
I’m standing at highway45.
Cars are zooming past inches from me.
My wristwatch reads 4:45 a.m.
4:46 a.m.
Ohh god I’m alive.
4:46:45.

Ohhhh fuckkkkkk!!!!
Head found decapitated.

14 comments:

  1. That was a scary read.

    Keep writing!!

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  2. @chatterbox:haha ohh the main objective was to make it scary!!objective completed!!keep reading!!

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  3. @kay:thx for reading and replying!!keep reading!!

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  4. @shadow:hehe thx for replying!!keep reading!!

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  5. Technically impossible. A watch never reads hour:second. Its only because of that that I am not impressed. You know me, I obsess about such minuscule details.

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  6. @mae:thx for replying and for following my blog!!keep reading!!

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  7. @daone:a watch technically can read hour:minutes:Seconds.i wrote 4:46:45 so that determines all the three time lines.i already referred to it as a vision.assume that the vision was blurred not like a clear scene that your eye can see.if he knew the exact timing was 4:46:45 he wouldn't have said the words "ohh god I'm alive"at 4:45.this 55 fiction was about a man testing his own luck and also the fact that visions can come true.he was deliberately present at highway45.if i would have written this explanation it would have been a 500 fiction.some things should be just left at the imagination of the readers.
    "perfection ruins the simplicity"
    i never try to write perfect.thts why i wrote 55 "fiction" i think i will add the the word fantasy too hehe.thx for reading and replying omkar!!keep reading!!hope dis will help u!

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  8. Wow. Great piece. Who knows what fate has in store for us and if we can even escape it if we get a glimpse into the future.

    Keep writing...

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  9. @dave:ohh hey thx for reading and replying!!keep reading!!

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  10. WOW this was a nightmare . so glad you woke UP.. great writing

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  11. @inky:hey thx for reading and replying!!keep reading!!

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